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A panoramic shot in England North Yorkshire Moors NP

taken from a roof of a building

Cam: D90
18mm
1/160 sec @ f/9

made from 4 pics

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The world is flat I tell you! lol
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There really is a nice feeling to that sky.

This has a very nice feel to it as a whole.
To me, the feeling that commes to mind is that of something dormant or hibernating, but with the increasing sensation that release is imminent.
The later would have been fun to see, when the sun is a little higher and the orange light really contrasted the heavy shadows of the trees. The more powerful presence of the sun could really have been brought forward in such a shot.

Damn, I'm ranting, and being nasty at the same time.
Just to make myself feel better about how much of an ass I've sounded like for a good amount of time, and also to make you feel a little better; I'm not bashing the piece, although it certainly does seem so. I'm trying, and failing, in giving some constructive feed on how to make a two part contrast each other.

Now, I don't know crap about photowork, nor am I schooled in the magic of composition so I can't give you any hint on how to achieve the desired effect, but I do know what kind of feeling I would've loved to see in a contrasting piece.
If this one does indeed give a sense of hibernation and stillness, then the other one should make you feel as if the light is almost alive, so that even if there are no people in the shot, something still comes across as awake and about.

I really do hope that this will help and encourage you to further increase the understanding of how to express feeling through your pictures.

If it came across as genuine nonsense, or negative criticism, just ignore it.

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hi well.... thx for the comment so far and nope sorry it only got slightly more orange when the sun went further down and more sun would'v ruined the athmosphere caus then it would be a simple landscape panorama
and the thing coming across as about i'd say is rather some kind of.... well...... dunno spirit or sth.
thx a lot for the comment tho and i'll try the next time in a situation like that to get more hibernation and expression to it

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October 4, 2008
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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D90
625/100000 second
F/9.0
18 mm
800
Sep 28, 2008, 6:37:32 PM

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